单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;连接词过少,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
This is my house. It is not big, but it is very warm. I live with my father, mother and brother in this house. I love my house. The house is very beautiful. There are two bedrooms and a study room. I love playing with my brother at the living room.