小学三年级英语作文:My grandfather

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My grandfather is a kindess man. He loves me very much. of couse, I also love him deeply too. My grandfather is tall and thin. He gets up early to take exercise everydy, besides, he keeps drinking 8 bottles water in a day, so he stay health very well although he is an 80 years old man. Before he retired,my grandfather was a primary teacher. he taught Chinese in school and his student likes him because he can let his class become an very interesting journey. Today is my grandfather's birthday. He looks very happy when he fond his grandsons and grandoughters came back home to celebrate the birthday for him. I hope that all happiness will surround him everyday.