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文章词汇表达比较灵活，学术词汇的使用要继续加强；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. The internet helps make many friends. Chatting on line, students can more freely express their feelings and opinions, and even get help with their foreign language studies. Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get cheated on line. It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.
