小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

this year my class came a new teacher who is call andy. she is a beautiful girl. she is 23 year old. she will teach us english . there are 45 students in our class. i hope our teacher yonger forever . it is kind of her to treat us.