高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown my hometown is located ZhuZhou Hunan province,it's a beaudiful place. when i was a kid, it's was a small village that far away from the city center, there were many trees surrounded it ,the buildings were old ,shabby, the blocks were very narrow, the river was clean,it had translucent water,and foster many fish. and the people was poor ,but they were happy every day. now,it has changed a lot, with the development of the economy,my hometwon become rich,there are tall buildings every there, so many cars down town.and the trees fewer and fewer, the river become dirty,you can't see any fish in it. the environment has been poluted seriously, it's emergency to solve the polution