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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；采用了一些简单的从句；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累。
Money is a thing that play a important role in our daily life. Every students has different attitude for money. But save money is a good custom for our future. So, I agree with save money to no make us become a small customer. We all know money is difficult to gain. Sometimes it need us to make a lot time and effort. So, we need to learn how to use and save. Saving money not means miser, it means reasonably use money. Therefore, Saving money can let us have a good life in the future. Some people always say save money is fool way, because money need to cost, and get the fun from spend money. Therefore, many people always don't care anythings to spend money. An the end, they will feel poor in their future. Money need to reasonably spend, need us to think how to spend, how to keep. it a wisdom for save money, and it good for our life.
