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Human races' activities have a long-term effects on our nature,it cannot be ignored that various seriously problems there have ever been built,but its obviously ignorant to think that it is useless to do anything about this phenomenon,due to the fact that we have a duty to protect our family which we depend on it to live. Some people,perhaps as the negative side when face to life,would rather not to do anything to get some change to the damaged globe they imagined.It is not hard to consider what our life will be before long
