全文结构较为严谨;作者应适量增加从句的使用量;文中能较恰当地使用学术词汇,但存在较多拼写错误。
The impact of the internet on interpersonnal communication is huge and often in two ways--positive and negtive. The positive aspect is you can talk to people who live in the different parts of the world because intenet makes communication convenient. you can make comments instantly and concisely , be responsive to any events when it happened and quickly covered by the media and reach you, and express your emotions more easily than when in face to face situation. You have the feeling that you are part of the world and have a role to play in it. The negtive aspect is that if you rely on this kind of communication, it keeps you away from face to face communication so often. Sometimes, the intenet world has gap with the real world ,which force you to tell for your self if the information you recerived is true or not. Another negtive side is those who has got no access to the internet are left alone and lose the chance of communicate with most of the people connected to the internet, esp. young people, a case that is true even in families. POsitive or negtive ,the impact is huge .. it has really changed our life in so many ways. with this kind communication , you are close to as well as far away from the real world.
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