小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Today , I will introduce my good frined -- Lucy . She is a pretty girl . She has long and yellow hair . Her eyes are black and bright . When she smiles , her eyes are more beautiful . She and I are classmates . We both like Chinese and math . She helps me a lot in my study . I love my friend .