2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my foreign friend visit my hometown。I will take him to visit my high school，To begin with，let him know about Chinese education that is different from foreign education。Besides，many students might have a chance to play with him。Such as taking a photo，teaching and so on。It is good for students to learn the importance of English and make friends。Second，hometown’s trees is very beautiful.Especially in autumn,the red leaves of the maple trees make the whole mountain red.What's more,I can take him to eat chinese food 。