过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用。
It is not wise that you get the result immediately when you see something or listen something. First of all, we may just see or listen a little part of the things so that we obviously get the ambiguous even the wrong result. What`s more, we could just think little about the reason of the things so we get the result without a deeply thinking. In advance, something is not as simple as we thought and it could caused by several reasons which we do not know. For example, if you see some one get a low grade in a math exercise, but the reason is that the math exercise is very hard for all the students. In my opinion, if we see or listen something about someone, we should think deeply with our brain and go to get some reason why the accident or things occur in this way.
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