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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
用户的作文(系统评分71.5分
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过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色;拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用。

用户练习作文:

It is not wise that you get the result immediately when you see something or listen something. First of all, we may just see or listen a little part of the things so that we obviously get the ambiguous even the wrong result. What`s more, we could just think little about the reason of the things so we get the result without a deeply thinking. In advance, something is not as simple as we thought and it could caused by several reasons which we do not know. For example, if you see some one get a low grade in a math exercise, but the reason is that the math exercise is very hard for all the students. In my opinion, if we see or listen something about someone, we should think deeply with our brain and go to get some reason why the accident or things occur in this way.

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