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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10402
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意极个别句子错误;上下文衔接稍显不流畅。

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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket. Nowadays, a lot of people like to put all their wealth into one thing or some person. They believe that they could gain their wealth easily and simply. First of all, it is very dangerous and a high task when someone do something like that. It means that if we fail in our business, we will lost everything. What`s more, we should device our wealth in different ways to reduce the disadvantage of some bad results. In advance, we should keep some wealth for us to make us set up again. So, even if we fail in with some reason, we also could put our rest eggs into other basket again. In my opinion, we should put eggs in different baskets to keep our wealth in different measures. We may get a better result if some specially things occur.

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