可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;请注意分段。
it is unsensible to give a instant answer as you saw or heard something.because people need some times to think the truth of the thing that they saw and heard, if they give a instant anwer,it proves that the answer is unthinkingly and most of that answer is wrong.we should think again and again before judging someone or something.
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