高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但要多积累学术词汇；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

I used to live in a small town with green trees and flying birds.There were so many clear rivers and pretty fishes swimming in rivers.The houses in the small town also very humble.The streets were so narrow and people who live there always work hard to make a comfortable life. But,in these recent years, tall buildings become common.People who become wealthy begin to buy cars so there are more and more cars in our streets.The pollution become more and more serious so that trees , flowers and fishes begin die away. Controling the pollution becoming the most important thing that we should do. Fortunately,People also realise the mistakes that they have made.So,I believe our hometown will become more and more beautiful in the near furture.