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Today,I will introduce my good frined -- Lucy.She is a pretty and lovely girl.She has long and yellow hair.Her eyes are black and bright.When she smiles,her eyes are more beautiful.She and I are classmates.We both like Chinese and math.She helps me a lot in my study.I love my friend .