2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词；句式变化较为不错，另外需加强句法练习；文中词汇表达丰富度要提升，可是单词拼写错误稍多。

As we all know,upon we see or listen to make a dicision , which is unwised. In my opinion,the one thing is everything in the world is not only one side,actully,it s often has another sides.For example,Rose is beauty ,but also can hurt peopel.so,we can t make conclusion in the first time we saw or listened it,we should think about it in some mature acassion to desided.The another ,as the old saying 'see people s heart in long time'.From the saying,we can learned that regredless a thing or people how kind ,we can t belived it right away . So,as the conclusion,we can t when we see or listen it to make a conclusion,it s unwise.