Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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It can share that these student ,who they don't diploma from university face to high unemploy rate ,on the other hand ,these diploma from university even higher diploma student face to lower unempioy rete in 2011.at the same time,student have to pay a great large nnumber of money to complete the education ,some student can't pay for it