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I have a good friend.She is a beautiful girl.She has long black hair,twi big black eyes and a red mouth.Her voice is better. She is good at singing.She is a clever girl.She likes reading books,playing computer games and chess .She is also nice.She often helps us.Our classmates like her nubelieable