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During this time,I have to write something.This is my first step of my review plan.Today I almost queried all the scores of my clasemates. Of course,I failed.The grade made my mood fall into bottom of a valley. Few people's grades are more below than mine.Even I have never saw such a grade in my life of CET6.How disappointed am I.I dare not tell anyone about my score.So I was forced to tell a lie when my friends who have succeed in passing the exam asked me whether had I passed or not.I told them I had forgot my number so I can't requry my score.In fact,I have been felling sad untill now.Nevertheless I have decided to cheer up and help me by myself.So I made a review plan to drive study harder.Keeping diary is a part of my plan.now, I am sitting in my office,while a painter is painting the wall into purple outside of my office.The odor of the paint is killing me and making me feel dizzy.Though the fan here works very well,the odor is filled of the whole room.Comparing with this smelly odor,the words that I was not able to write down make me more desperated.I have to go on writing until 18:00.It will be a long journey for me to when I glance at the time---17：55.I have to try my best to think about something to kill the long time.
