单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。
Good friend Kenne and I are in the same class. He is also my good friend. We go to school together because we live in the same village. We familiar with each other before. We were in the same class when we were in garden. We play together in the weekend.