2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

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With the development of people's emotion,more and more people have the concience of risky.As said,it's unwise to pull all eggs in one basket. In college,most of students don't have a kind of pereporation,and they will do more pereporations.Not only study students their majors,but also they study other subjcets.Because they have the concience.If they pull all eggs in one basket,and the basket was broken down,all eggs would be broken.Their road will be smaller in the future.