新课标八年级下学期期末测试冲刺复习专题书面表达（1）：聚会邀请信

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Dear Mary, Thank you very much for inviting me to your party. I hope I can be there with all of you.unfortunately, I can't accept your invitation since my mother is sick and I need to take care of her for a couple of days as docoter's requirment. I have recived your postcards that you made it by yourself. Thanks a lot and I truely love it so much. I will put it on my desk then I can see it everyday. Hope everyting is going well in your party. have a nice day. your sinciely Hanmei June 18, 2010