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Recently our calss had a discussion about what they would do in the coming summer vacation. Here is the result. There are three opinions can represent our classmates desiring for how to spend their summer vacation. One opinion is going to Beijing for vacation spending. The opinion from Tian and she said she is going to Beijing to visit the great wall and other beautiful sight in Beijing, such as Beijing Tiananmen suare, Lama temple. another way to spend vacation is have fun. they are plan to ride bike to park or to climb mountain and such so on. The third opinions is rather to saty home for sleeping all day. Jim said he fell so tired and they want to stay home a rest. For me, in all holidays, I like summer vacation best. I am going to have a trip to Japan with my mother. I am looking forward the travel comeing.
