2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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My foreign friend wil visit my hometown.I feel like wonderful.I want to take him to BeiJing because BeiJing is the capitai of the city.which had a long history.And it has some sumer palace.For example,beihai park,beijing University and so on. beijing university is a good college in china,most famous people are in it.