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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；句式灵活多变，但文中的句子错误偏多；作者在学术词汇的积累上还要再接再厉，另外请检查文章的单词拼写；请注意分段。
as the abviouse picture, follow the ecnomy development of the china,the compute had became a part of life. so computer have influnce our daily life,diffrant peopel have differant mind ,some peopel wonder the computer is vary good for everyone , because the distant became short why we used the internet to crashes ,shopping-net and finding informaton of your need. but another peopel was think it poor to our boody and mind .for example ,many adulte and child abandant herselfe to computer games ,last but lot least ,some people is cheared of contrast as far as my concened, we must to learn how to indentify the ture and trap
