牛津英语八年级第四单元测试考试作文及范文

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I went to Beijing wildlife zoo with my parents last sunday. There are altogether 300 animals in the zoo. Besides saw tiges and lions in the zoo, I also find some small animals such as snakes and forgs. There are so many tourists in the weekend. some of tourists feed monkeys and played with tigers with fun. the animals are look fridely to humam. Ererything is fine expect that I saw rubbishs on the ground everywhere. these rubbishs is disharmony with beautiful park. I wish that people don t throw the rubbishes in everywhere. Animals is our good friend, if we human don't protect them, they will extinct in the future soon. It is nessussary that we all need to protect our friend. To protect animals is to protect ourselves.