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The internet The inernet is very important to our life and study. with the internet, we can collect useful infromation for our study when we do our homework. with the internet, we also can buy the goods but don't need to go to supermarkets. As we all know, The internet is changing our life. We reading books on the internet and we don't need to buy a paper book in the bookstore. The internet changs our's life. it make life become simple and let people have more lesiure time for relex. On the other hand, as everything has two aspects.The internet has its bad effects to us. some of the children are addicted to play games on the internet. some of them spend too much time on it and have to wear glasses because short sight. The internet is only a useful tool. we should use it as a proper way.
