高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

从句使用不熟练；文中单词拼写做的不错，另外再增加词汇量积累就更好了；过渡词和衔接词使用欠丰富，层次欠清晰；请注意分段。

My hometown I like my hometown. Two years ago, my hometown was surrounded by beautiful woods. There is a river between two moutains. The fish were have fun in the river. The houses were humble and the streets of the hometown were narrow. The peoples were poor. But now, There were tall buildings all over the streets. There were a type of running cars on these streets of the town. But with the development of industry, pollution is more and more serious. The trees was cut down and the fish were dead. So we must to cure the pollutions.