小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

文中从句数量过少；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且要加强拼写检查；请注意分段。

I have a good friend, we met each other on bussiness work. she is a very buiteful girl and very strict with herself. she does anything very serious and careful.she has made a great sucess in her job. we usually eat togther,go for a shopping on weekend. Then after a long time, we are in love with each other. she is my girl friend now, and i am happy about that.