题目:Computer and Man人与电脑
字数:150满分:100分
复杂句使用不错,句法规范;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
Computer and Man As we all know, nowadays technology has developed greatly, therefore, computers are created, meanwhile, computer and man has tight relationship. In the society, some science men say, with the developmet of the computer, it may be replace the place of man, and it also may be resault in the sad end. But, in my eyes, computer can never take the place of man, because of man's willdom. Man create compters, and we won't let computer's willdom be higher than ours. We only make them help us do something we don't wang to do, for example, to take some heavy things or clean the room or do some same things all day.Human is smart, and they won't get too much power wo change our world. Some people have the same idea with me, computer is just a kind of tool, and it can make our life more beautiful and won't make some hurt to us.