小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend named ping, she is very beatiful,tall,thin. we study together,eat together.we have so much happy memory.but now we speprate because we have different goal.she lives in my hometown, i lives in a big city.but we still think each other.we will meet on october,she has a son, i have a daugher.i very expect the day will come early.