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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8984
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分56.0分
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文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累;能够使用一些简单的从句;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

It's very unwise and stupid that judge a man by his appearance not by personality. Our socialty make so big process is based on the human being's inteligent and creativity, not everyone' beautiful apperance. Naplon shock the Earoupen with his 140cm tall, can you regard him as a stupid man? some body have a good heart even has a urgly face, is gentle to everyone , and will be a very kind friend. we should love the kind heart, a person like a orange ,outer is how urgly no matter,inner is sweet, that's most important. so beauty can be found everywhere, you need an eyes to find it. and the most beautiful is a kind heart.

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