2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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on the overusing of the mobile phone today more people are using the phone，and the phone give us more convenience,for example,we can use the phone to talk with somebody everywhere ,and we can communitate with our classmate who have been graduated from school,keeping their frendly contact with themselves.at the same time ,it also have some defects ,we have talk with somebody by phone ,and we face-and-face communication is less