2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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my hometown is very beautiful ,have a lot of place and interest,if my friends going to my hometown i will take him to the temper .i think the air in there is fresh ,the sky is blue it;s very beautiful.i think he will like there,second i will take him to my old house ,because is very old he my learn something from it