小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is ping, she is very beautiful,tall,thin. We had studied and eat together for many years.We have the same interesting,the same goal,the same dream.we have so much happy memory.but now we speprate because we have different goal.she lives in my hometown, i lives in a big city.but we still think each other.we will meet on october,she has a son, i have a daugher.i very expect the day will come early.