小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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My friend is ping, she is very beautiful,lovely and thin. We recgonizedWe had studied and eat together for many years.We have the same interesting,the same aim,the same dream.There is much happy memory,but now we separated because we have the different target.She settled in my hometown and I live in a big city.Nonetheless we still miss each other.We will have a meet in october,she has a son and I have a daughter.I very expect the day will arrive early.