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My friend is ping, she is very beautiful,lovely and thin. We recognized when we were the small girl.We have the same interesting,the same aim,the same dream. We had studied and eat together for many years.There is much happy memory between us. We separated when we are adult because we selected the different work and the different city.She settled in my hometown and I live in a big city.Nonetheless we still miss each other. We will have a meet in october.She has a son and I have a daughter.there is very dramatic our babies born in the dame day.I very expect the day will arrive early.