高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章组织结构良好；文中词汇表达不够丰富，学术词汇方面要多累积；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习。

my hometown in the past，my hometown surrounded with beautiful trees and flowers。the river was clean and the fish live there happyly。people in our hometown work very hard。 but now，there are more and more buildings appear on our's hometown。with the development of my hometown，more personal car cause more busy traffic。the air become terrible，the tree，the fish may be gone before long。 so，is high time to take measures to control the produce to make our town beautiful again。