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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36991
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
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文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些学术词汇;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。

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My friend is ping, she is very beautiful,lovely and thin. We recognized when we were the small girl.We have the same interesting,the same aim,the same dream. We had studied and eat together for many years.There is much happy memory between us. We separated when we are adult because we selected the different work and the different city.She settled in my hometown and I live in a big city.Nonetheless we still miss each other. We will have a meet in october.She has a son and I have a daughter. Our babies born in the dame day.I very expect the day will arrive early.

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