作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但词汇表达多样性不高,拼写检查还需加强。
Thinking over before doing it We live in a imformation explosion era when we can get any imformation from Internet at any time. But all this imformation is so large and confused that we can not make out .Sometimes we make a conclusion without thinking over it,and generally this conclusion is complete wrong. So we should realize that it is not wise that once you hear something, 'you make a cinclusion immidiately in this time. The relationship between doctors and patients has become increasingly bad recently. One of the reasons is: a few doctors are not conscientious and treat petients unresponsibly. Some typical examples are reported. So many poeple decide that most doctors are only thinking about making money and do not care about patients'lives without thinking and investigating. Consequently,patients'relatives show no repect to doctors and even fight doctors when the petients are on the edge of death. Doctors and petients do not believe each other. According to this example , making hasty conclusions can lead to very terrible results. So think over before doing it. Through thinking and analyzing, even wrong conclusions make sense. But without thinking,even right conclusions are useless.
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