可适当增加从句和长句的使用;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;文中用词稍显贫乏,同时请注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。
Nowaday,many students do not give attention to spelling. I think the reason why they don't give attention to spelling is that they don't like writting.It is time for changing this solution . In order to change this case,we should use pen as much as possibol.We shouldn't just read it.we must not only reading but also spelling the words.