2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer and Man nowadays, computer had been a import part of our daily life, we use them to comply our jobs and gave us more infermention what we want through internet. it provided many profits for us and at the same time computer brings some bad things. in a word,we can not lost it.