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Huangshan mountain Huangshan mountain is located in south of Anhui province of China. As a famous world heritage and an important scenic spots, Huangshan mountain attracted thousads of tourists to visit Huangshan every day. Huangshan mountain has four most famous scenic areas for touring. when you climbing the mountain, you can see "the sea of clouds" scenic, It looks very beautiful especially when the sunrise in the early morning. you also can see the unique rocks and wondrous pines in everywhere. you will couldn't help exclaiming:" what an amazing journety!" The transporation of Huangshan mountain is very convenient, you can get to there by train,plane or take a bus. It will take 3 hours by bus to the mountain. If you too tired to up to the top mountain, you can get there by cablecars, it's very convenient for tourists to visit there. To sum up, Huangshan is a nice trip for the tourists. I recommend it as your first consideration.