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作者词汇量积累不错，学术词汇积累较少；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。
During this time,I have to write something.This is my first step of my review plan.Today I almost got all the scores of my classmates. Of course,I failed.The score made my mood fall into bottom of a valley. Few people's scores are more below than mine.Even I have never saw such a score in my life of CET6.How disappointed am I.I dare not tell anyone about my score.So I was forced to tell a lie when asked whether I had passed it or not by whom have succeeded in passing the exam.I told them I had forgotten my number so I can't get to know my score. In fact,I have been felling sad till now.Nevertheless I have decided to cheer up and help me by myself.So I made a review plan to drive me study harder.Keeping diary is also a part of my plan.Now, I am sitting in my office,while a painter is painting the wall purple outside my office.The odor of the paint is killing me and making me feel dizzy.Though the fan here works very well,the odor is filled with the whole room.Comparing with this smelly odor,the words that I was not able to write down make me more desperate. I have to go on writing until 18:00.It will be a long journey for me when I glance at the time---17：55.I have to try my best to think about something to kill the long time.But I can't find anything to write except all those boring and simple words and similar sentence structures.All of those words remind me that I are such a fool and how poor my English is.Yes, I must adjust my attitude of English study.Spoken English is very important,but other skills of English are the same significant.By the way,remembering words is also a crucial part,so I am obliged to remember words during my spare time.I had arranged some stars to stand for the efficiency of my study.
