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托福独立写作模拟题:关于宠物

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:28浏览次数:726
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question:
Read and think about the following statement:

Pets should be treated like family members.

Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.

题目讲解

本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章。
观点提示
1、 宠物可以陪伴老人打发寂寞。
2、 把宠物作为家庭成员对待,可以培养喜欢宠物的孩子爱心。
用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中部分句子有错误;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays people buried themselves in the busy life,they seldom have a break even though in the free time,in other words,they have no time to stop working,or like the old,the reason that they feel lonely because there is nobody keep their company.Thus,the pet,becoming the only thing to make people relax. Keeping a dog as a pet,which would bring us something we can never imagine.To our delighted,they should read our mind,whenever you feel upset,anger or disappointed.A puppy is supposed to lick its host,when the host immersed in sadness

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