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My classmate ,chen,he is not feeling very well the day.he have got a very bad headache. he couldn't come to school.So he go to see a doctor. In the hospital,we are lable to look after him.We buy food and fruit in the supermarket for him.Mr Wang,who is our math teacher,help him to study the parcial that him've missed during the duration when he was ill.After three days ,he is fine.This thing let me feel warm,which is the manual care for people.
