2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Computer And Man In recent years,computer has played an increasely important role in our daily life.As we all know, computer has impact human beings by all kinds of aspects.Since the computer was invented,human has been more and more depend on it,for computer make human sociaty change a lot.Majoraty of convince and shorter distance come,when man got to know how to use computer to improve our sociaty. In the first place,it is very convenient for human to enjoy life.With the development of sociaty,there are more and more stores in the internet.So we can stay at home all the day but order all kinds of food as lunch on internet.The same way,we needn't go out but buy beatiful clothes, which made in all of the world. In the second place,human can get plenty of information on the inthernet.Computor is seemingly the biggest liabory in the world,you can find out almost any thing you want.Computer will be a good helper when you composing an artical,on the internet,a lot of figures ,pictures and vedios await you to take full use of them.Even,you can find your way accroding to the map on the internet when you get lost.The last but not the least ,computer has become a popular way entertainment human.Human are likely to shopping on the internet that shopping-online has formed a kind of new way to earn money.In fact ,shopping-online is not just satisfied to what you need,it is also a good way to have fun.Computer games nearly are the most comfortable way to kill the long time for boys and some girls. To sum up,computer has become a necessary part of human's life,and has relatively developed the human socialty,at the same time,changed the human socialty.