托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；句式变化多样；能较灵活地使用部分学术词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。

There is an old saying,instant effort plus luck equal to succed,which I can't agree more. Talking about the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life everyone holds his or her own idea about that.First of all,Some people regard honesty as the most important factor to be successful.And I do agree honesty is one of the most significant characteristics when you get along with another person.But from my point of view,if you want to become successful,hard working always is the most and the only one key to achieve your goal in your life among all fields such as career,research even though your love. Above all mentioned,only in this way can we make our object come true.