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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

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作文题目:

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor?) that a person can have to be successful in life?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么?给出原因并举例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。

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There is no doubt that constant effort contributes to succeed,which I can't agree more. Talking about the most important characteristic that a person can have to be successful in life everyone holds his or her own idea about that.First of all,Some people take honesty as the most important factor to be successful.And I do agree honesty is one of the most significant characteristics when you get along with another person.But from my point of view,if you want to become successful,firstly you must trust yourself and spear no effort to work as hard as you can then you would achieve your goal in your life among all fields such as career,research even though your love. In sum,working hard is the basic factor for becoming successful.

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