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Tony,13 years old,Class 4,Grade 1,England,father, teacher,school,mother,
doctor,brother,driver,favorite,blue,vegetable文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累；连词使用偏少。
My name is Sun Meijie.I am 14 years old. There are 4 people in my family. My father is worker. My mother is a housewife. I have a younger brother, he is a pupil and he is very naughty. I have long black hair, a pair of brown eyes. And I wear glasses. I am of medium height and medium build.I love to laugh, I think I am a sunshine girl. I like to read books and watch movies in my free time. "Time is the soul of the world."is my favourite saying.In the end,I want to tell you"Wonders will never cease,never give up" Is over.Thank you.
